Re: hey!
> Re: hey!
>
> > Emptiness- is it a state of mind
> > Or is it a physical thing?
> > Is it a noun or an adjective
> > And to what does it modify?
> > Remember what a room is
> > And what it encased.
> You didn't ask for feedback, but I'd like to put in my two cents.
> Your topic is too large. Emptiness? Of what?
> The best poetry I've ever read has been about small things; the death of a
> sick puppy after it pooped on the paper (Good dog), what a winidow does with
> her dead husband's underwear, cooking 46 cheeseburgers and 40 orders of
> fries, a childhood memory, the first time you did it in the back seat of a
> car with a girl you didn't particularly like. These are the e topics that
Thanks for the comment, I absolutely agree with you, this has been one of the
most insightful critiques I have read about poetry in a while, and I
appreciate it....
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