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Bill Gambrell | All | one more |
July 25, 1995 3:27 AM * |
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i'm putting together a several books of my stuff, and i would greatly
appreciate any comments or constructive critism about anything i post (feel free
to be harsh), thanks }:-)
She saunters through a life of mystic fire
with a beauty that her soul just cannot hide Amber webs of gossimere flow
behind her
and scarlet whispers that she won't confide Will I ever come to know the
reasons
of how she became an Angel in my mind For I have loved her throughout all
the seasons
yet her scarlet whispers I may never find
I wanted this poem to have a certain "beat," does it work?
--- InterEcho 1.10
* Origin: AuthorsNet[tm] HQ, Dayton OH, 513-848-4288 (1:110/700)
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