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Message   David Cariddi    Avi Shalem   POETRY   June 5, 1995
 3:46 PM *   

Re: POETRY

>  I'm standing naked and disheveled
>  watching carlin sleep..
>  Dark swollen angels
>     hover
>  above our lair,
>  thier laughter etched within my memory
>      as
>  sharp clairvoyant reality
>  Supple women walk circles
>  around my skull
>  they've come to torment me
>  Carlin does not believe
>  they do this spitefully
>  I believe only,
>  in the heave

I *really* like this.

It's wonderful.

You might wanna check the spelling, though... =)

But otherwise, I love it.

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