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Clem Mascarina | All | .. |
August 15, 1995 3:05 AM * |
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Here is something I wrote for my english class in my senior year. It's a pastiche of one of the chapters (1st??) of Alan Paton's "Cry, the Beloved Country." It might be considered to be poetry. But I don't know, you judge for yourself. I'm just posting here to see what type of reactions I get. :] There is a beautiful key that lies in the middle of a string of other lovely keys. These keys are of an iridescent, ivory color. You also see some lovely, ebony keys which overshadow the ivory keys. Pressing the key tht lies between all the other keys, you hear the sweet, smooth sound of C. You look down at the keys from a broader scope and you notice that they are not alone, for encompassing them is a great case of wood. From an even wider scope you see that you are in a house; about you there are walls and furniture of various kinds and below you is a carpet and above you is a roof. Beyond the walls are the spacious yards; and beyond them, more houses. The carpet is gray and unsoiled, above it you stand. It holds up the furniture, the walls, and the roof. It is looked after, not too many spills and drops are made on it; and not too many black feet walk on it, breaking the appearance of it. Stand unshod upon it, for it is beautiful like the ivory and ebony keys, for which it complements with high degree. Cleanse it, crae for it, watch over it, for it adheres the furniture to the walls, the walls to the roof, and everything to itself. Degrade it and the house is destroyed. Where the wooden case of keys stands the carpet is gray and unsoiled, above it you stand. But over time, neglect brings soil; the carpet cannot hold up the furniture, the walls, and the roof. Too many spills and drops have occurred, and too many black feet have walked on it. Stand shod upon it, for now neglect allows for it. The carpet is not cleansed, or cared for, or watched over, for it no longer adheres the furniture to the walls, the walls to the roof, and everything to itself. The sound of C is not so sweet and smooth anymore. The gray carpet has turned black. It no longer complements the ivory and ebony keys. The furniture do not stand; the walls have fallen over; the roof has collapsed. People down on their knees try to scrape away the black from the carpet. But there is no hope of restoring the house. The people do not come here anymore. END. Actually, to me, this is like a short story which teaches a moral. But at times, I find it to be poetic with its repetitiveness and short sentences. ��� |
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