Re: one more

> i'm putting together a several books of my stuff, and i would greatly
> appreciate any comments or constructive critism about anything i post (feel f
> to be harsh), thanks }:-)
> She saunters through a life of mystic fire
>     with a beauty that her soul just cannot hide Amber webs of gossimere flow
> behind her
>     and scarlet whispers that she won't confide Will I ever come to know the
> reasons
>     of how she became an Angel in my mind For I have loved her throughout all
> the seasons
>     yet her scarlet whispers I may never find
> I wanted this poem to have a certain "beat," does it work?
> --- InterEcho 1.10

that is very nice.  Ya, it does have a certain rhythm.  I like the
description.  It reminded me of this series of books I'm reading about the
Incarnations.  Like Death, Nature, Fate.  It really reminds me of Fate, the
certian aspect Clotho who spins the threads of life.   I like it a lot.
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